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Monday 23 September 2019

Number 28

Number 28


Write a story using the picture above as inspiration. Is this the beginning of the story or the end? Where is Number 28 going and why? Who is Number 28? What is Number 28 walking toward? What is Number 28 leaving behind?

Be creative ...is it real life or fantasy? Sad or funny? Scary or possibly true?


EXPOSITION: 
Who: Number 28, And his unknown friend.

Where: Science lab.

When= Year:  2030 Days: 1st - 3rd Month: January 

Hook: During a horrible sight of seeing a dear friend that has passed obnoxious. turn an innocent experimental subject Cruel.

BEGIN WRITING HERE:
1/1/30 Number 28’s P.O.V
One late afternoon I walk down the hallway to meet up with my friend. We’ve been friends ever since we were taken hostage by scientists. They told us we were special and needed special treatment that only we could have...But it wasn't really special for us. Every 7:00 pm we had to have it on the dot. They would burst into our rooms and tie us down making us completely still as if we were not alive, pouring a burning our metal inside of us.

7:00pm 2/1/30

“AHHH! LET ME GO YOU ANIMALS!”

No one replied. They just left with no emotions. 

“So rude...I think it’s time to escape.....”

“NO, we can’t number 28! I feel too weak right now”

“Well no matter what I'm going without you or not..”

“Fine…”

“We will start tomorrow in the morning 6:00am”

5:50am 3/1/30
As we both Jump out the window making the biggest noise ever we run for our lives. Sirens go off but since we are big people thought there was an earthquake. 

“Help! Number 28!” 
  
And BOOM! a helicopter grabbed him/her and took off leaving no trace of him/her ...To be continued......

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