Choose it (Narrative story) Draft #2

One late night two families of one kid have trouble with the members of their family. So they decide to meet up and discuss when they should leave. On october the 13th, They decide to go today, they pack their stuff up and went to the place they always went there together. After they meet up they both shared a memory about them being happy with their family. Hours has passed, after the talk about the two kids families, they began to walk to find their new home. Its 10:30 so late. They both go to a nearby tree and laid their stuff down to sleep. A couple of minutes have passed their is a lots of noise at this time of day.

“I think it's the tree,” Joseph whispers to Claire.

“Oh don’t be silly Joseph, ” Claire answered back .

The kids wondered about the tree, as it whispers to them, “Hello kids. I think your lost would you like to come with me to my place?”

The kids were terrified of the sound it whispers again. “Don't be shy it's ok”  The kids have heard about stranger danger but it was night.

No lights, nobody everyone was a home asleep. The kids thought about the consequences if they go, but didn't know that it will happen this quick . The tree began to grow as the sun rises up too. It turn into this tree house? The kids woke up and saw that they were at the tree, they both said that it was just a dream but, the tree turned into a house? The kids go into the house to investigate it.  the tree said something.

The kids were frozen and asked it “Were you the one talking to us?” they both ask shivering in fear.

Tree replies with a caring answer, “No need to be afraid, well I help towards good and caring people”

Meanwhile as the kids a have a second to realise that they were overreacting,

the Treehouse begins to talk . “Why are you kids here?” Kids have no reply from the question. Tree asks again “Why are you guys here?”

The kids shrug their shoulders. The tree thinks about what could've happened to make those kids come here?

Tree asks another question. “Did you guys run away from home or come here to camp?”

The kids lean against the tree not knowing to answer or not. The tree tries to give a good explanation to the kids but fails. The tree gives up. The kids felt uncomfortable with the tree after the talk .

The tree knowest the kids and tries to make it up to them. “ Hey you guys could go the playground, around the corner”

The kids jump in excitement and of course says yes. The kids run to the playground, but comes towards the police trying to look for them.

“Oh no” they both say with worry in their eyes.  Draft #2. To Be Continue…..

Choose it (Narrative story) Draft #1

One late night two families of one kid have trouble with the members of their family. So they decide to meet up and discuss when they should leave. On october the 13th, They decide to go today, they pack their stuff up and went to the place they always went there together. After they meet up they both shared a memory about them being happy with their family. Hours has passed, after the talk about the two kids families, they began to walk to find their new home. Its 10:30 so late. They both go to a nearby tree and laid their stuff down to sleep. A couple of minutes have passed their is a lots of noise at this time of day. “I think it's the tree,” Joseph whispers to Claire. “Oh don’t be silly Joseph, ” Claire answered back . The kids wondered about the tree, as it whispers to them, “Hello kids. I think your lost would you like to come with me to my place?” The kids were terrified of the sound and whispers. “Don't be shy it's ok”  The kids have heard about stranger danger but it was night. No lights, nobody everyone was a home asleep. The kids thought about the consequences if they go, but didn't know that it will happen this quick . The tree began to grow as the sun rises up too. It turn into this tree house? The kids woke up and saw that they were at the tree, they both said that it was just a dream but, the tree turned into a house? The kids go into the house to investigate it.  the tree said something.

The kids were frozen and asked it “Were you the one talking to us?” they both ask shivering in fear.Tree replies with a caring answer, “No need to be afraid, well I help towards good and caring people” Meanwhile as the kids a have a second to realise that they were overreacting, the Treehouse begins to talk . “Why are you kids here?” Kids have no reply from the question. Tree asks again “Why are you guys here?” The kids shrug their shoulders. The tree thinks about what could've happened to make those kids come here? Tree asks another question. “Did you guys run away from home or come here to camp?” The kids lean against the tree not knowing to answer or not. The tree tries to give a good explanation to the kids but fails. The tree gives up. The kids felt uncomfortable with the tree after the talk .The tree knowest the kids and tries to make it up to them. “ Hey you guys could go the playground, around the corner” The kids jump in excitement and of course says yes. The kids run to the playground, but comes towards the police trying to look for them.“Oh no” they both say with worry in their eyes.  Draft #1. To Be Continue…..

Creative writing.

Well if you were wondering, how did that bus get their? Why is it so old and gross?

Who did this? Well let me tell you how it all happened.

In 1919 on October the 30th early the morning around about 6 or 5, Which is Halloween so a
family  when camping to see if anything spooky happens. WAIT let me introduce the people in
the story. Mom: Her name is Hannah, but let's just call her mom for now her silk is looking after
family and very overprotective. Dad: Name is Cole, chill dad and very fit, wants people to see
him as a role model and for he kids as well. Kids is a girl and a boy both twins, Boy: Name: Liam,

wants to explore and achieve in almost everything.Girl: Name: Kat, Loves food but very fit,
everybody adores and appreciates her.  And yes I Know nobody goes camping before
Halloween, but this is in 1919 so maybe we don't know.

So the family got onto the bus and drove off to their destination, but there was a problem there
was something fishy about the bus because no one would even go on the bus plus the bus
driver stop to pick the people up. Waiting and waiting, but they weren't even close to the place,
plus it was going to 12pm they got on at about 6am or so. But the family weren't happy because
since it is Halloween they get to go straight there but no more and more people kept on coming.

The family told the bus driver to stop the bus but little did they know he wasn't listening to to them,
not making eye contact at all too. Dad says “ Umm hello stop the bus please”? Mom

“ Hello can you hear us”. ”OH sorry I could knot hear you over the noise” replied the driver.

“Ummm well can we get off here sir” “Umm are you sure? “I think you will regret it”. “Reminder-
t is 5pm a the moment”.Back to the story the family weirdly and kindly accepted the offer

and got off the bus questioning to each other why did he say that? “ Well that was creepy-
and spooky” Said The family. Well isn't it nice and relaxing out here” the family say to each
other and agree little by little. But with the kids complaining that it is very cold outside
with a bunch of blankets on.

Let's all camp out here Dad says. NO! We all say. Mom Says “ I know it is very nice and
soothing out here, but it is very cold for the kids they would get a cold”. With the kids agreeing
with thir mother, they all go to a close by hotel. Ahhhh this is the life the mom says
but with poor dad emptying out all of his pockets paying. Now with the kids their trying to
do something uhh okay what are they doing, I think their packing up and their going
into a time machine?“Woooow this is awesome where should we go?”  Said Laim.
“Ummm I'm not so sure” Repelled Kat. “ Oh don't be so silly we can make it out alive”.

“Woow what time are we in?” Hey lets go tell that old man over there.

”Uhhh hello sir but do you know what year we are in?” Said the kids.
“Well hello there kids umm that was a weird question but it is 2018”.
”WHAT” went the kids they start to panic. “Hey hey hey calm down now tell me-
why it is so surprising that it is 2018?” said the man. “We came from the past”.
“Umm thats none sense but if you say so” WAIT another reminder the kids are 11-

turning 12 years of age, carry on. “Uhg never mind” the kids say and walk off.

Well since we are here let's walk around? Well that not a bad idea and i was a bad idea.
And they were walking for a couple of hours and they start to worry. So they had there stuff
so they went camping in the forest.Oh look is that a bus? I think? Um let's go investigate.
Wait is that our bus that took us to the hotel? If you enjoyed and read till the end you are
amazing and if you liked it, I will try to make more if I have the time bye!